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This is Elita - Maelstrom's 15th chapter. If you haven't read the preceding chapters and the nine comics which started it all, I recommend you do. This story picks up where The Return Of Optimus Prime (Gen 1 cartoon) left off, but we've come a long way since then.
Summary...Elita's back, the guys are in trouble, and lots of Quints get creamed.
Story - Mine
Character's - Hasbro's
Maelstrom Ch 16 Dating Prt AMaelstrom Chapter 16Series Start:
Dating - Part A
Author's Note
This story is part of a long series called Maelstrom. It is strictly Gen. 1 - sorry, but that was all that was out when I started writing. If you have not read the nine original Maelstrom Comics and the preceding text stories, I strongly suggest you do. Each scene is posted in 15-20 page increments, which is the most DA will allow me at this time. If anyone knows how to get longer text files posted as a whole please let me know. Comments and especially crits. greatly appreciated.
“GET HIM TO MED-BAY! NOW!” Optimus roared over the communicator.
Springer and Blurr had no idea what was going on, but they really didn’t need Optimus’ panicked cry to motivate them. Rodi’s inert, grey form was motivation enough. Blurr had Rodimus by the ankles almost before Springer had a solid grip on his armpits. The triple-changer started off in the
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This is Elita - Maelstrom's 15th chapter. If you haven't read the preceding chapters and the nine comics which started it all, I recommend you do. This story picks up where The Return Of Optimus Prime (Gen 1 cartoon) left off, but we've come a long way since then.Summary...Elita's back, the guys are in trouble, and lots of Quints get creamed.
Story - Mine
Character's - Hasbro's
Mature
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This is like a novel I'm reading. Acctually the whole story got me so worked up that I couldn't stop reading and ended up going to bed at 5 am on a Sunday-to-Monday night. ... Well I guess I'll just stay home today from college today O.o
This was stupid of me though.
Still the story keeps me so thrilled... and terrified. somehow.
I adore the way you write though - even when English ain't my mother tongue.
Still... terrifying. *sigh*
I better leave it for now and continue reading another time.
This was stupid of me though.
Still the story keeps me so thrilled... and terrified. somehow.
I adore the way you write though - even when English ain't my mother tongue.
Still... terrifying. *sigh*
I better leave it for now and continue reading another time.